Poem- in need of opinions

[A]

Dawn.

In the glistening luminescence of the moon,
Pale and fragile as petrified silk,
Filigree tendrils of reverie
Advance, intrepid across the sky.

Prone and vulnerable
To the onslaught of the sun,
Still the nightly quest repeats.
Casting webs of brittle hopes and shards of desire
Amongst the glittering stars.

The tensile beauty of flickering fantasies is mesmerising.
Delay the daylight.
Hold off the dawn.
Dream.

[palindrome]

Hey I can appreciate what you're trying to do here. I like the association of the sun and daylight with reality, and the night and moom with dreams and fantasies. I think you should use this in a story or a larger series of poems, because it would be really useful and effective in a scene with a character who can't face the world, or is waking up in a prison cell (with a view, of course). It's good on it's own, but would be great if applied in the right situation. :-)